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Dear Mr. Little:
I am writing to you to express my interest in the Junior Project Manager position advertised on the Creative Focus Consulting Group website. I hope you will find my relevant education and past working experiences can make me a very suitable candidate for this position.
Working in a creative multimedia company before, I was able to exhibit my creative talents and skills as that focused in creating online educational and fun-learning games for kids. I was the Art Project Coordinator in that department and managed the completion of all art-related projects to be delivered on time. Consequently, I rose to my ranks in then becoming the Project Coordinator for all three interactive departments – Art, Technical, and QA – to maintain the work efficiencies, coordination of all member tasks, as well as communicate with the Project Manager upon the progress and status of all projects.
It is because of my achievements that make me feel that working in the Project Development Department of the Creative Focus Consulting Group is a perfect match for my needs. It would be great to expand my knowledge on product focus, delivery of quality products, as well as increase my efforts as a creative thinker to create a difference in your organization. Furthermore, I would also like to expand my vision as a Project Manager and become an important player in your company.
It has been my strong organizational and time management skills that has not only met the demands for my previous company but has exceeded business expectations with my proficient work. My main focus in my past working experience has been to understand what the clients actually need, as well as understanding the satisfaction of business needs. Additionally, I keep myself updated with the recent Project Management tools and methodologies, to keep myself aware of the changing demands in the marketplace.
Finally, I have attached my resume in this email, and would really appreciate if you could give some time in reviewing and assessing my skills and qualifications. I hope to follow up with you on this valuable position by contacting you over the next couple of weeks. Please do feel free to contact me should you have any further questions regarding my candidacy.
I look forward in hearing from you soon, and hope we can both benefit for the long-term success of your company.